I got it the first time when he tortured someone that he really enjoyed and didn't really need to go through it again.Īnyone skittish about blood play shouldn't read this because it's all that Diesel is into. I also thought the violence built around Diesel became rather gratuitous. I think the story could have been much shorter and not peak out at the half waypoint. I actually thought they were waaay too good for witchy bi*ch girl Roxy. Oh.I do have to say that I LOVED the men, Diesel, Garrett, Ryder, and Lenzo.

They considered themselves the rulers of the city yet a dysfunctional smaller organization had them running in a circle. I kept wondering why it was taking The Vipers so long to get control of the situation, which, by the way, was not well explained, and kick a*s. It was definitely secondary to the storyline. The other part that challenged my interest was the territorial conflict between The Vipers and Triad. I wanted to slap her and tell her to grow up and appreciate the unbelievably wonderful situation she'd found herself in. A lot of readers hear seemed to see her as a strong woman but I thought she was just immature and faked her way with her obnoxious bravado due to her difficult life. They are not people you mess with, yet my dad did. Their deals are as sordid as their business, and their reputation is enough to bring a grown man to his knees, forcing him to beg for mercy. Free-spirited, kick a*s crazy, and a brat. Ryder, Garrett, Kenzo, and Diesel-The Vipers. And these guys were all gorgeous Greek gods. The idea of four hot men loving you is a fantasy, right? Wow. I love hot unbridled s*x but what took place here was basically the same each time with the exception of Diesel who loved blood play. Halfway through I became bored due to a lot of repetition.

For me the book was seriously too long 654 pages (Kindle). I was thinking I'd be following many other readers with an enthusiastic review.

Kenzo den of vipers